Last Flicker Of An Old Flame Comments

You've called out for and listened to the voice in you to become your guiding star...

I like that metaphysical side of the poetry when metaphors become kind of voices, flames passing the way. Wonderful example is this poem. The message is indirect and the voice (the metaphor) is open for interpretation. well penned!

I have been saved by that other voice on occasion. I am thankful for that other voice. Very good write.

Compelling music.One could almost dance to this one. Very well written indeed. Encore! Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

The dilemna... the thought... then sense. Well delivered James

Every line speaks. The dilemna is a real one and interesting. Beautifully phrased. Thanks James.

James, The soul shouts from depth silently... And a pain even more boundless... I Wish you healthy and calmnesses of soul... Tsira

Yes indeed, too soon old too late smart. A very good message here James. Melvina

...is done is done. And life goes on!