Last First Kiss Comments

A beautiful passionate write on genuine reciprocal love.

The joy of first passion. Just a wonderful wit and imagination, Enjoyed. Read mine—Bloom of Youth - Adeline

Simple songs my heart to sing Here in this bliss My last first kiss An excellent love poem conveying every lovly emotion.Well done.Keep it up 10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

I voted this poem as a highly rated 10! dorothy A. holmes

Exquisitely sublime. A wonderful expression of how truly wonderful and fulfilling it is to find your true love. Wonderful piece.

Oh My! A beautiful verse and there is no doubt that this First Last Kiss is the best you have ever dared to share! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Your phrase LAST FIRST KISS is a wonderful metaphor all by itself. It only takes a few moments of thinking about the three words and then PIING! I know exactly what it means And what it means - this is real, lasting, genuine passion, it will last characterized by this tenderness and passion. I always look for the argument in your love poems, that is, what the poem says about love in terms of ideas. But it's the feelings evoked that make a Love Poem work. And the feelings evoked here make the pulse race with delight.

So wonderfully described your passions running through you! Loved it.