Friday, March 8, 2019

Last Embrace Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last Embrace

I am not a shareholder of your Blessings,
Nor am I a proxy player in the stage of life,
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Prabir Gayen
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Ms Doubtfire 26 February 2020

Finally both can rest,

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 March 2019

A touching and moving poem, Prabir....10++++++++++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 March 2019

My childhood friend. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ramesh T A 08 March 2019

Most touching tribute indeed!

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Julia Luber 08 March 2019

Exhortational, heartfelt and embellished with sincere pain, Prabir has created a profound scream for his soul, couched in a variant floral degree of poetry.

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Srijita Mondal 08 March 2019

Being away from You O My Master! I feel pain of Sin of shocking Kind, Dense and ineffable and Irredeemable, Away form Your Loving Sight I hide ...................................................................... Do not leave me even in Death

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Srijita Mondal 08 March 2019

I am a tested self liquefied with forgiven blows of life, A silent ascetic being drinking Each moment the bitter juice of Pain ...................................................................

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Srijita Mondal 08 March 2019

Beyond the border of Mind and Time, I live as a forgotten self and dejected, In the sequestered forest of my being, A solitary witness of life and death ................................................................

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 March 2019

Yet my heart yearns to take an upward flight...........Yes, as per my intuition, you will fly going high...touching the sky! A beautiful poem tinged with spiritual vibe! (10)

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Ayan Mondal 08 March 2019

In my silent solitary being I adorn You, With the flowers of my tears and grief, forgetting my personal joy and sorrow, I hold you tight in my laden heartbeat

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Ayan Mondal 08 March 2019

O My Master my Childhood Friend! I played with with in every Season, In Sunlight and in Moonlight with prayer, If Life fails, let me be embraced in death

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