Sunday, September 3, 2017

Last Embrace Comments

Rating: 4.0

I cannot say goodbye to you
our time together was too brief
I can't restore our yesterday
for death is but a heartless thief
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Barry Middleton
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Bharati Nayak 04 September 2017

I cannot say goodbye to you our time together was too brief I can't restore our yesterday for death is but a heartless thief but I am still the man you loved a memory I hope you keep I step into eternity no last goodbye to make you weep - - - - - - - - -An emotional write that touches the core of my heart.We can not undo many events that are already past, but there has been a desire to correct the mistakes.Poet's heart beats for the love though it was, brief and can not say good bye.

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Dimitrios Galanis 04 September 2017

An apologise better than this one could not imagine.An apologise for life's unwished paths we took or it happed to be laid to us by uncontrolled circumstances!

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