Last Domino Comments

I think its its beautifully lonely.. And barb, hope to see you back soon

Loneliness silent epidemic To live meaningfully one must combat loneliness. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

Pack full of foreboding and the tics talking. Sorry for your troubles and loss. Hope you don't mind, but I'd consider dropping the last line. Not only does it leave the last domino either standing or not placed (glimpse of hope) , or it stands, or it falls. It also bookends your piece quite tightly.