Saturday, November 14, 2009
Last Day At The Baylands Comments
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the last day at the baylands
and already it's rained
but the sky is that blue for now
and the geese buzz me
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Beth Bailey
14 November 2009
Oh! It was perfect until the last 2 lines......Maybe the rhyming was unintentional, but I bet you could come up with something else to prolong that melancholy feeling.
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7/27/2025 11:53:13 PM # 1.0.0
No, actually that's ripped off from the end of a Jackson Browne song. I was too lazy to compose something to echo that sentiment - another symptom of hanging around Baylands park.