Saturday, December 12, 2009

Last Day Comments

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i sit here,
as i hear the cheers.
the seniors screaming,
cause it is their last year.
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brittney brooke
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Zac Wilson 12 December 2009

You could use some work on your line lengths, which comes with practice. But, other than that, good job.

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