Thursday, January 8, 2009

Last Day Comments

Rating: ★4.5

The cloud were all dark
Dumping rain down
And we stood in the park
with no one else around
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Lauren Saari
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Alexis Saari 08 January 2009

Great poem Lauren. But you would never be beaten to death. I'm such a good sister that i would probably follow you and then save you. Dont pretend like its never happened before. haha... but actually.. anyway.. good job. keep it up.

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Lauren Saari

Lauren Saari

Canada
Lauren Saari
Lauren Saari
Canada
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