Thursday, April 15, 2010

Last Dawn Comments

Rating: 3.3

Your hair is lost in the forest,
your feet touching mine.
Asleep you are bigger than the night,
but your dream fits within this room.
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 December 2019

poet Octavio Paz#140 on top 500 poetsPoet's PagePoemsQuotesCommentsStatsBiographyShare on FacebookShare on Twitter Poems by Octavio Paz: 7 / 16« prev. poemnext poem » Last Dawn - Poem by Octavio Paz Autoplay next video Your hair is lost in the forest, your feet touching mine. Asleep you are bigger than the night, but your dream fits within this room- great poem and imagination

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Adeeb Alfateh 26 June 2019

Outside a taxi passes with its load of ghosts. The river that runs by is always running back. it's great wrote great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Stella L Crews 25 June 2019

I love a good poem about time from inside time. - slc

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Castellenas John 12 March 2019

Outstanding poetry by the ancient poet.

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Britte Ninad 12 November 2018

last dawn - white spirit of the unknown cosmos! ///

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Kim Barney 20 July 2018

I would like to see this poem in the original Spanish, because I suspect something was lost in the translation. Some of this makes no sense. Just admit it, people, instead of blindly praising every poem they choose for poem of the day.

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Chandan Dey 20 July 2018

The river that runs by is always running back. Will tomorrow be another day? it's an extraordinary poem with deep philosophical insight. Chandan

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 July 2018

A highly imaginative poem nicely executed. Nice presentation.

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Savita Tyagi 20 July 2018

Great sketch of a thought blended with togetherness and awareness of moment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 July 2018

Your feet touching mine! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 July 2018

I agree with poet Patricia Grantham: This is a 'poem of deep imaginations and thoughts'.

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Glen Kappy 20 July 2018

Asleep you are bigger than the night, but your dream fits within this room. How much we are who are so little! These lines I relate to. How thoroughly occupied, entralled, we can be with another person or wrapped up in ourselves—and then we get another perspective. -GK

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Adrian Flett 20 July 2018

The river a symbol of time as it runs always and runs back. A great and thought provoking image.

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Robert Murray Smith 20 July 2018

Interesting - - - - - -

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 July 2018

Such a brilliant poem by Octavio Paz👍👍👍

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 July 2018

As if I'm in jailed of my predecessor's phantom! All of them pull me down and back but this world runs and runs ahead forcibly....! excellent theme and writing

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 19 December 2017

There is always a question for tommorow, so let's better today and now. Good

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Your hair is lost in the forest the poem starts and words of flow in such beauty and it is great.

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Dawn Fuzan 06 May 2014

wow nicely writen keep writing

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Kim Barney 20 July 2018

He can't keep writing. He's been dead since 1998.

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Brian Jani 03 May 2014

I like this poem.its uneque

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