Last Dance Comments

A DANCE is a deceitful way that gave me too much pain A DANCE is deadly weapon used to stab my heart A DANCE is an unfair reason to blow away my simple dream A DANCE is a cursing moment and not worth to remember “LAST DANCE WITH YOU WAS THE LAST TIME OF KNOWING YOU” you have written in a great poetic way all your disappointments. that is life. we plan, we love, we hope, we dream but......... and it is a great but....... why should life be like that? no answer.. thank you very much for this poem.

This poem has quite a few things, the beautiful dance as a King and Queen, the love and its charms and the ending on a sad note.......Good

The idea of blending dance of love with resultant broken heart is very good. Nice poem. Any poem that refers to the main idea by an indirect inference always sounds stunning and beautiful.

it is great cuz it blinds the past with the future of poem writing.i highly recommend it.

I recommend this because of the sincerety of feeling expressed in this piece. I also thought it was organized well. But sincerety was the key. GW62

Thats getting it out for sure