Last Dance! Comments

Hey its me, Roach's girlfriend... I loved this one. Im going to post a similar one so maybe your can read it. Its a little more explicit and not as creatively allegorical as yours. I feel your heart in this one. But i still want more of it...

Wow that was great, it makes me think about my brother, RIP Chris

Wow Deep man good work though keep it up! ~

nice peice, great expression of how we feel. you may be interested in reading my poem junkie, my words

hey rain mountain.god help us all.save the last dance for the best.all the best to you pal.emotional write you got there.

I found this piece to be much clearer. Ther message was presented in a clever way. Demonstrating creativity. I recommend this piece.