Thursday, January 13, 2005

Last Dance Comments

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Once upon a time, I had dreams
One upon a time, I had hope
Then my stars fell from the sky
I saw the moon melt in your eyes
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Kim McInnis
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Matthew Hyatt 12 March 2005

Your poem has excuisite imagery and text. Good work

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 27 February 2005

beautiful imagery, especially the first line..i love it

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Kim McInnis

Kim McInnis

LaSalle Ontario
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