Sunday, June 26, 2011

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Rating: 3.0

My mind is blank,
my body numb.
Who is this in the mirror looking back at me,
what have I allowed myself to become.
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Candy Simpson
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Lisa John 19 March 2012

Hey! I so get what you are saying through this particular poem and it helps to know I'm not the only one

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Great poem. I was impressed. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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