Wednesday, March 1, 2006

Last Call Comments

Rating: ★3.1

when coffee comes at last call
the rain still clings to my leg,
like a memory, like i wish a you would
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John Kipling Lewis
rain Sex
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K Holoholo 06 November 2007

I almost get this one but not quite and what is the 'like i wish a you would' all about? It makes me want to write a whole new poem around it.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

6. Almost works. But the images are uneven and spotty, mixed with telliness. Keep the former, cut the latter.

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John Kipling Lewis

John Kipling Lewis

Manhattan, KS
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John Kipling Lewis
Manhattan, KS
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