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Humanity dies! Seeing the ways of mankind on earth today. Thanks for sharing.
Life and death! With the muse of Mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Hey Mike, I gotta say I totally dig it. Short, raw, yet very loaded. Ive always appreciated the appropriate use of minimalism in all forms of art, few can really pull it off, but great use of words and a profound meaning
Aloha Cole... I do so appreciate the concise and potent comment... These types of reactions to such a simplification of that 'problem' are truly heart felt... IAM grateful that you are aboard here at ph.c. and look forward to discovering just how, your art will be received by the lords and ladies of this court.... Puling off a truly socially significant post is a one in a million chance and by the Fates desires, and my thoughts, this little dart made it... Working on that neo one all the time... Thanks my brother bard, for your examination and trust in these things... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
Nice haiku........ short n impressive, please read my poem A recipe for poetry and an acrostic peace
Aloha Arfa... IAM pleased that your have trust in this post... and I must so profoundly apologize for not catching this comment back in December... Please do not think that I do not appreciate your visit and in the most humble of ways I thank you... and I will review my reads and comments and visit your page to read your offerings... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
No matter how many times it transpires, death is always a real shocker. Ready or not, it's sure to come. Thanks for the sobering haiku reminding that 'humanity dies.'
3 great lines, unforgettable really! You deeply looked thru the human looking glass, and told the truth.
Abstract form, compactness of the truth, said very courageously. Bravo.!
Very insightful indeed and compassionate.......Michael..........very well composed...............
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7/19/2025 4:43:14 AM # 1.0.0
Yes in the 21st century we of hear this humanity died. This time you did but lost time I did it. Fantastic poem, dear walkerjohn my poetic friend....Says Harindhar Reddy