Tuesday, June 9, 2015

Last Breath Comments

Rating: 5.0

Twilight gleams ever so hauntingly like a spirit restless
with a feeling that the sun’s disappearing.
The northern lights arise to reveal an ominous omen
as a centaur gallops stampeding the helpless.
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Paul Amrod
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Anzelyne Shideshe 16 May 2017

It is there last breath, the devil comes strong at death He......pulls his knife and holds the whole neighborhood hostage Daughter.......and camouflage Great sentiments of crimes that are happening around us. Beautiful piece Stay blessed

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Paul Amrod 06 February 2018

Hi Anzelyne, I don't know what got into me to have written this. Sometimes I like to play the devil's advocate. Thank you, Paul

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