Friday, September 4, 2009

Last Breath Comments

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It was a day so lonely and cold, it was rainy and and sad.
No show of it lighting up or hope for any one.
They knew it was the end of everything any everybody.
So there was no point of running, no point of hiding, no point of doing anything, but make your mark and hope it stays.
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Melissa Schreuder
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Sai Saketh 04 September 2009

Good... you've presented an actual situational poem.... very nice...

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