Tuesday, August 11, 2009

Last Breath Comments

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if i had to
choose between
loving you and breathing
i would use my last breath to
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mari velazco
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HaZeM PaKKaR 11 August 2009

very well written poem.. but i will choose '' breathing ''.. i love your unique style in writing.. please, NEVER stop writing & let me know about your new piece! !

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