Sunday, January 21, 2018

Last Breath Comments

Rating: 5.0

If there is no air to breathe
And there is no food to eat
Will you survive on this earth to live
Why you are existing here
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 December 2022

Rini where you are now? If you can log in for a while, you can find many of your fans who have motivated you to come back and write. This is a very nice poem. Top score!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 December 2022

Yes, I worry about that also Bravo! ! ! !

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Robert Murray Smith 18 June 2018

If there is no air to breathe it is finito instantaneously. Good write on love.++10

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 January 2018

Why do we all fight? ! Oh mankind! Hatred and war will NEVER bring us peace. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 30 January 2018

Peace and love all seek.. Thanks

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Tom Allport 29 January 2018

a poem of many questions that most loving people think? ...................thoughtfully written Rini

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Rini Shibu 29 January 2018

Thanks Tom! !

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Rebecca Navarre 22 January 2018

Such Awesome Beauty, Depth, And Power Within! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rini Shibu 23 January 2018

Thanks for your kind words Rebecca

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Lamar Cole 21 January 2018

This is a very thought invoking and insightful poem. It would be great if every living member of the human race read this poem.

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Rini Shibu 21 January 2018

Thanks for your compliments lam

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The Crow 21 January 2018

Were we born to love? Good one Rini

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Rini Shibu 21 January 2018

What you say? ? Thanks John

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This was Judith Blatherwick. She writes under a different name everyday.

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