Monday, May 4, 2009

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Everything feels like it should finish last…
That it should just for fit.
How can you end what’s in the past?
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Rose Bean
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Lady Grace 14 June 2009

this is a beautiful poem..nicely penned..grace

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 07 May 2009

A beautiful thought provoking poem. It has more than one dimensions but the last stanza brings it back on track and the poem completes its circle successfully. Keep running and keep writing, Rose..........10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Clayton Young 04 May 2009

I like it Rose, it shows a lot of compasion and drive to do your best :)

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