Saturday, June 13, 2015

Lashed Arrows Comments

Rating: 4.3

Latent clocks forge their fraudulent time

But still their rigid works spin
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Chloe Lubinska
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2016

Cradling a death Blood that drips, thick and thin Constant throughout our own awareness Hence our perception frozen to a bias angle. insightful , a lot of conviction. awareness , perception. so many ideas. thank you very much. tony

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Chinedu Dike 28 June 2015

Lovely piece of poetry insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. Indeed time moves so quickly while we're busy chasing shadows ignoring the things that matter most. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 13 June 2015

A very uniquely worded poem that laments a fact of life. Thanks for sharing, Chloe Peace

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