Thursday, March 16, 2006

Larry Had A Hat Comments

Rating: 5.0

Larry wore a top hat, that was as tall as tall could be.
Now when larry wore this hat, he was mistaken for a tree.
Now Larry held a secret, within this big black hat.
He did not want all to know, that his head was rather fat.
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Janice Brodie 08 April 2006

This poem is so delightful! Love Janne*

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Sandra Fowler 30 March 2006

Wonderful poem, Sylvia. It manages to be both amusing and touching at the same time. That is the mark of true talent. Imagination could do no more. Love, Sandra

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Duncan Wyllie 29 March 2006

I think that this poem could be looked at from many different angles and many different emotions could be called upon.It's full of creativity and that's one of the reasons that I'm giving this a Ten.Brilliant poetry! , Love Duncan

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