Sunday, March 16, 2008

Languid Lubricity Comments

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I stand stripped - naked - knowing his whim,
looking in the mirror at the sparkling gem
that hangs from the bracelet around my wrist;
and I smile to see him smile. I can't resist.
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Linda Marie Van Tassell
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David Lewis Paget 04 May 2009

This is one of the most sensuous pieces, I think, that you have favoured us with. I'm not surprised that there are no comments on this piece, as I can imagine raised brows, pursed lips and squirming cheeks in your readership, not to mention a maiden blush or so from a maiden aunt. But deep down the secret desires respond, despite a veneer of prudery, and your sensuous tale finds its home in the damp undergarments of young girls, dreaming of such a love, unfurled.

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Linda Marie Van Tassell

Linda Marie Van Tassell

Lynchburg, Virginia
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