Language Of The Heart Comments

oath pledges by promise of lofty mediation endearment resolves to uphold light of love like soft meadow bristles by sparkling rays heart to assuage over riffs of assailing storm, ingenious write by imagery

Thank you all for your comments, I honestly felt this would be another one of the poems I am constantly altering. But I read again after 3 months and I realize how perfect the feeling spilled. I am happy :)

I would never hit you, I would hold you. I would never yell at you, I would speak softly. very sensitive n cruel lines....

OMG... You did such a good job. BEAUTIFULLY PUT..... LOVE IT... , ; ') ~

Great poem the way it was put together and everything

This is a very nice poem.

Really like this, shows real real emotion. Agreat write.