Tuesday, March 20, 2007

Language-Less Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am just a rogue, an not a good one at that
Every word I bother to utter is stolen
Pretending to pick the fruit beneath my hat
From purest humans hanging furs to not let the cold in
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Dennis Murphy
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Fiona Davidson 12 November 2008

True in what you seem to be saying...but yet your words are new as is each new love...thank you...xxFi

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David Harris 22 March 2007

Dennis this an interesting piece of writing. The flow is very finely knit as the lines melt into one another neatly. An enjoyable read. A lot of conclusions can be drawn on what you have written here. Thanks for sharing it. David

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