Thursday, October 23, 2008

Lanes Of Friendship Comments

Rating: 0.0

Often you block the storm

that few emotions cause,
...
Read full text

Cherry Sha
COMMENTS
Sathyanarayana M V S 13 November 2008

Cherry u hve a nice way with words. But I wish to suggest two things; rather pass them on what I learned from my seniors: Poetry must touch the subject in general and be ready to relate to any reader; secondly be brief. U will become a very very good poet

0 0 Reply
rohit sapra 07 November 2008

This poem is great as it reflects true essence of true friendship.

0 0 Reply
C. P. Sharma 01 November 2008

you have the poetic passion and poise. keep it up my friend.

0 0 Reply
Cherry Sha

Cherry Sha

India
Close
Error Success