Often you block the storm
that few emotions cause,
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This poem is great as it reflects true essence of true friendship.
you have the poetic passion and poise. keep it up my friend.
Cherry u hve a nice way with words. But I wish to suggest two things; rather pass them on what I learned from my seniors: Poetry must touch the subject in general and be ready to relate to any reader; secondly be brief. U will become a very very good poet