Monday, March 16, 2015

Lane Of Verdant Elixirs (Being Inspired By Savita Tyagi’s Poem Journey Of Life) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The train is stopped on the outer signal,
Waiting for the green light,
The journey is about to end,
I am afraid to be checked and fined,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Abhipsa Panda 13 October 2018

Nature has its own beauty..beautifully expressed..thanks for sharing..

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Savita Tyagi 20 August 2018

Read this poem after a long time again. Fresh and beautiful as ever.

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Mark Heathcote 23 June 2015

Travelling on highways, Always ignored, This narrow pavement, Lane of Verdant Elixirs! Beautiful I enjoyed the way it flowed.

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Hazel Durham 18 March 2015

I love this outstanding write with imagery so moving and vivid, that flows with your gift of writing from your heart!

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Savita Tyagi 17 March 2015

Also loved the picture very much.

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Savita Tyagi 17 March 2015

Wow amazing poem! 'The piece in you traveling on highway always ignored....' The rush of life ignores the lane of Verdant elixirs. Just beautiful! thank you Akhtarji loved this poem so much. A 10. Thanks for sharing. By the way it's your heart that inspires you but thank you so much any way for mentioning my little poem.

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Valsa George 17 March 2015

This is just lovely...... lovely like the verdant stretch of land with the rainbow tying both its ends like a band of multicolored ribbon as shown in the picture you have attached! Enjoyed!

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Khalid Saifullah 17 March 2015

The piece in you, Travelling on highways, Always ignored, This narrow pavement, Lane of Verdant Elixirs! A beautiful poem.........................10

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Bisma Mirza 17 March 2015

Wow... Amazing one..10 on 10

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