Wednesday, October 11, 2017

Landscapes: The Invitation Comments

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The broken brow of the night

Over the midnight hour of my grave
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Seema Sharma Rimi 28 October 2017

The broken brow of the night Over the midnight hour of my grave You sway in a silver time boat. Love the great romantic write. 10+++ for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 December 2017

for these words of encouragement SS.

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Sabita Sahoo 28 October 2017

The broken brow of the night Over the midnight hour of my grave You sway in a silver time boat. A great romantic haiku full of metaphors.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 December 2017

for these words of encouragement dear Sabita.

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D Priyanka Singh 13 October 2017

The broken brow of the night Over the midnight hour of my grave You sway in a silver time boat. Wow, what a haiku? 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 December 2017

for these words of encouragement dear DP

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 12 October 2017

The broken brow of the night Over the midnight hour of my grave You sway in a silver time boat. Great poem, thanks for the sharing. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 December 2017

for these words of encouragement dear Soumya.

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Lopamudra Kajolika 12 October 2017

The broken brow of the night Over the midnight hour of my grave You sway in a silver time boat. Nicely penned. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 December 2017

for these words of encouragement dear Lopa.

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Alina Kaikeyi 12 October 2017

You sway in a silver time boat. A very outstanding poem with so much eros poured. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 December 2017

for these words of encouragement dear.

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Muzahidul Reza 12 October 2017

The broken brow of the night Over the midnight hour of my grave You sway in a silver time boat. an excellent haiku poem full of landscapes scents, thanks for sharing +++++ 10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you sir for these inspiring remarks.

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Nosheen Irfan 12 October 2017

A lovely metaphoric write. Stunning expression.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you my revered poet of excellence for inspiring me with so kind words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2017

Broken brows of night and midnight are amazingly expressed through words of expression. This haiku is brilliant.10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you Sir for your kind remarks on the poem.

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