Thursday, November 29, 2012

Landscapes Of Living Comments

Rating: 5.0

A farmer late one night
standing alone in his field,
seeing a satellite cross through the dark...
finally realizes his fate is sealed -
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Smoky Hoss
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Valerie Dohren 22 December 2012

Some really, really beautiful lines in here Smoky - pillows are sprinkled with dreams..... gorgeous! A brilliant piece of work.

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Joseph Anderson 22 December 2012

Deep and dramatic, touching the very essense of our being. A truly classic write. Hang on to your muse and have a great year

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Matt Mooney 13 December 2012

Brilliant poem. 10.

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Heather Wilson 11 December 2012

A wonderful write, travelling through life, described so well, I much enjoyed the read.

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Claudia Krizay 09 December 2012

This is the second poem of yours I have read and I am really impressed- what a moving poem with a beautiful ending- looking forward to reading more of your work! !

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Eric Cockrell 04 December 2012

a thousand births and deaths, and all of them miracle. well written!

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