A farmer late one night
standing alone in his field,
seeing a satellite cross through the dark...
finally realizes his fate is sealed -
...
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Deep and dramatic, touching the very essense of our being. A truly classic write. Hang on to your muse and have a great year
A wonderful write, travelling through life, described so well, I much enjoyed the read.
This is the second poem of yours I have read and I am really impressed- what a moving poem with a beautiful ending- looking forward to reading more of your work! !
a thousand births and deaths, and all of them miracle. well written!
Some really, really beautiful lines in here Smoky - pillows are sprinkled with dreams..... gorgeous! A brilliant piece of work.