Monday, December 10, 2007

(landscapes Collection) .... Driving At Dawn On December 10th (Revised Version Dec.12th) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I promised my friend Ruben that I would try to write a poem about driving in the dark and drizzle of an English winter and here it is:

Low Cloud Over the Motorway [that's the Freeway if you are American]
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Janice Windle
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Brian Jani 16 May 2014

Janice Amazing showcase of poetry, keep it up

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Ivan Donn Carswell 28 December 2007

Quite an accomplishment - writing poetry about English winter dreary, drizzly motorway driving. But you succeeded. The images are grey but clear, the frustration all too evident. Well done. Rgds, Ivan

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Fred Babbin 10 December 2007

You really have to think about this one to get the message. Very good.

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