Friday, March 9, 2012

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Falling, falling and falling
You do nothing but fall.
Leaves are falling throughout year.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 March 2012

a kind of uniqueness in this poem, but I could not figure out. After reading one more time, wabi sabi, I understood that you try to write a poem on love. Cleverly written poem. For the trick of this poem I give you 10 marks.

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