Land Under Seige Comments

some people live under siege and they cannot see the way out... but no seige is worse than that we build around our heart, it's when we pretend that does not exist poor persons, victims os war, and the only thing we feed is our pride... your poem deserve more than a ten... hugs.

yes you are right about the question what should we do? ? ? ? ? what should we do? ? ? we can't do anything coz we rely on other person to do something, when we start believing on ourself then 'the sky will shine with peaceful bright the heaven will appear here with love filled delight and the waiting will end of it may be might.........' thanks for sharing this thought provoking piece,10+++ and sorry for the late reply rgds asif

nice piece, great theme hidden voice in your beam it is amazing, .......wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo rated ten for the love cotained whthin.

WHAT SHOULD ALL OF US DO ABOUT THESE NASTY HAPPENINGS? EXCEPT WRITING!

OOOOOOOOOOH! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ....THAT IS REALLY SOOOOOOOOO SAD AND REALLY TRUE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...IT CAN DESCRIBE WHAT IS HAPPINING IN THE MIDDLE EAST VERY WELL.........YOU ARE REALLY GREAT AND CREATIVITY WRITIER....KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP WRITING AND NEVER GIVE UP.........HONESTLY, I LOVED YOUR WRITING STYLE..... :)

the poem captures the feeling so vividly and truthfully..excellent work

The title of this is ' Land under siege'. That is the wrong title for this writing. It should be called, 'People under siege.' Other than that, I find there is very little that I would change. I thought it was presented correctly and it contained a great sentiment and the ending was very good. A nice piece. GW62

i didnt like the ending that much. doesnt fit with the poem. i giv you 6.5. u had better poems

Nice use of words! Very real and deep! I love it

wow that is heart throbbing. i loved it! REALLY good job on word choice and its really emotional. nice work. keepit up. erica

its wonderful and pure, has innocent meaning and i really enjoyed reading it from all my heart. tc and keep up

wonderful poem.... May God always bless you, bro... thanks for sharing ++++++++++++++++++++++10.

great poem describing everyday life, and the accidents that happens much there, in the poor countries...very nice.........................

oh my god, i love this and ofcourse your talking about palestine :) it made me sad, its truely amazing, great write xx

an excellent poem shows the suffer which palestine face...and yes what they should do?

This poem goes right to the heart. Sweet and yet so true...10!

What should we do? A fine poetic query to answer rightfully........all we have to do is to share love and care, in our own little way give them comfort and a piece of prayer......Nice poem....10

help...that's the frst word i could offer...but how? ...thats the first question i would ask...this piece is nice, ,

Well good write but you should put your work in stanzas and make it flow more

if you want the truth, , , i will that my words are finished and the letter is hiden feeling shy to express about this honestly questions and expressions so thanks for sharing...