Land Of The Free - A Pantoum Comments

John this was a very good poem. I though I rarely do, writing in form is very rewarding when it can express what you want others to hear. You seem to have a gift for doing just that keep it up. A 10 in my book.

Such a great pantoum begins with an invitation and ends with it. An interesting play of verses forming the final masterpiece. It's a great poem John..Cristina Teodor

Come with me to the 'Land of the Free' So beautiful John x

It's a real Pantoum, John...beautifully written

awesome, truly captivating.......i want that land......

Every dream is for the dawn of a paradise where humanity lives in harmony...The paradise exists in such poems......and in the depths our heart resides divinity.....great work sir