Saturday, March 19, 2016

Land Of Oz Comments

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You came from the land of Oz
Just like the raindrops in the beginning of june.
The purpose of your arrival is unknown,
but still there was a hope for me.
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Dr Antony Theodore 19 March 2016

This is the simple of hope for my life, even if i am empty, There is someone to make me something. But there is hope for someone just like the- nightingale wait for the rain……. poems ends in hope.... that was fine to read. you convey hope to the reader. thal nkyou. tony

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Ahammad Kabeer 19 March 2016

thanks tonny.. your words always helped me to do further.. please introduce me to large circle.. m new born baby here

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