Land Of Chocolate Comments

Hahaha what a funny and lovely poem. The most delicious poem I have read. Yummy!

How deliciously delightful and yummy. Nicely done and the subject matter was very appealing in the best way. T

delicious poem with sweet and dreamy flavor, well penned, my friend. keep it up..

yammie yammie...i come from a chocolate land..a real one! ! ! !

How wierd is this...I was just talking to a friend about the film and then I found this poem...brilliant....loved the flow of the words...thanks for sharing it...Fi

delicious imagination.. that's so yummy.. ; -)

Nice feeling about imagination and end's all well with nice flow.

From one choc-o-holic to another, may I say - What a feast of a read! Yes, Willy Wonka comes to mind - I can still remember the way he describes Charlie's very first bite... You have certainly let your imagination carry you way up into those forty foot clouds of fairy-floss in this extraordinary read. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Nice one Well done.