Land Is Planned Comments

very good write makes this poem out of sight and since i love rhyme and verse it could get better, but it can't get worse.

OH...this is a very nice poem.. i really liked it :) thanks for sharing.

thats a good funny one well written

There is a saying 'Why sky is so high? Because grandmother told a lie.' The words 'sky' and 'lie' rhymes, but is there any sense in these two lines? Rhyming should be meaningful, as you say.

Its quite fine, with rhymes and rhythms

i can see that you have put figuratives here.... your poem is really good!

very awesome poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Why cry with eye and lie with die? Nice reflective poem touching 10/10

Land is Planned - seems the only concrete thing