Friday, April 13, 2018

Land Comments

Rating: 5.0

It would be nice to live in a land.
Where everyone stayed well.
And donuts never went stale.
A land where everyone thought smart.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 April 2018

It is better to live in a land where everyone plays by heart, where everyone takes care of his neighbors, and where there is peace. Dear Lamar, you have so nicely and touchingly inscribed this theme in your poem. Noble ideas. Beautiful poem.10

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Rini Shibu 13 April 2018

Life will be beautiful then..Nice to dream

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