Sunday, April 24, 2011

Lancelot To Guinevere Comments

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Believe thee not shame upon our love.
Believe thee not disgrace upon our kiss.
There is honor in our hearts endowed above.
There is nobility in our lips’ blessed bliss.
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Hal Caufield
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 24 April 2011

Beautiful poem marked by amazing wisdom and depth. Very strong structure with great imagery. A poinant write indeed. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing..... Please read my new poems.

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