Tuesday, July 29, 2008

Lamentation On Lost Love... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The shrill serenades
drifting from flutist’s clarinet
rush to dance with the rhythmic beats of the wedding drums.
Festoons of golden marigolds bound with mango-green leaves
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Bharat Trivedi
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Susan Jarvis 29 July 2008

A wonderful command of language - you've painted a poignant, liguistic picture - the closing two lines are crushingly vivid. S :)

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