Saturday, May 26, 2018

Lamentation #2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

From shill to shadow
You see the flow
Of a mind trapped
Within a ghastly tow
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Jason Bonhomme
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Chinedu Dike 27 May 2018

Deep feelings elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Well conceived and brilliantly crafted. Thanks for sharing Jason and do remain enriched.

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Jason Bonhomme 28 February 2019

Thank you Chinedu, I have started reading your poems (there are many!) , I do appreciate the encouragement and your insightful comments. Greetings from Australia.

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Robert Murray Smith 26 May 2018

An imaginative write with great imagery I enjoyed the ride..++10

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