Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Lament's Treasure Comments

Rating: 2.8

Thoughts impregnated on the minds of the weak
As thy tongue seeps spit, of gain less remorse
Saliva soured statements of regret
Rage onward, 'pon thy uneven course
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Dr Kamran Haider 23 March 2009

I lived not of defined prosperity Yet I danced alive of own destined will My voice of breath and body limp, now spared Thou' immortal spirit, you cannot kill So tormenting... Very well written... I would say that very few poets here have this vision, what you have got ma'am... The words, the flow and the composition; everything has an essence of truthfullness, sincerity and it really made me think alot... Brilliant write....

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