Saturday, October 13, 2007

Lament Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh for the time when love was young
And the lines that cross my brow were far from me
That the song of passion could once again sing in my soul
But alas I must be riddled with the truth
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Patricia Gale
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Meggie Gultiano 19 October 2007

From the beginning to the end..wow..very passionate..Only you can do justice with this Pat..top marks! hugs, Meggie

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Deeply contemplative, almost mournful. Well scribed of course. But as others have said. no! no! no! If anything, love is wasted on the young..... t x

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Thad Wilk 13 October 2007

Beauty inside a person is what shows through and reflects always a pretty picture of you! A real nice poem Patricia! (10) .... Thad

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Francesca Johnson 13 October 2007

A sad and soulful rendering, Patricia. But I have to agree with your other readers - love, passion and a renewed zest for life can happen at any age. Love, Fran xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 13 October 2007

Patricia.. Love comes looking for you, age as nothing to do with love, no matter the age you can fall in love...10

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