Lament Of Love Comments

Earth rises from The fear of darkness To a glowing dawn. A poem with an excellent beginning and a beautiful ending, a tribute to earth.Well written.Well done.I enjoyed it Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

excellent..! ! ! your imagery, your words so wonderful and yeah, i agree with Valsa.. Earth has been betrayed by her own children She is now crying and wailing, waiting her death thanks for sharing this great poem and i invite you to read mine

An excellent write Ashly! I certainly wish to see the malayalam version of it, as I was born and brought up in Palakkad. Mother earth do send us message by her rage of fire and her cry of rain. The sad part is her children are not matured enough. Or are they oversmart?

A very good poem Ashley! Nature is being robbed and exploited by her own children! We ungratefully betray her while, like a loving mother she gives us life and sustenance! Your young mind is saddened to see the atrocities done to her!

you've written it so well/excellent poem! !

Well written.....yes Karayunna Bhumiyamma..right