Thursday, January 31, 2013

Lament Of Loom Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lament¹ of loom²

I am not saying a word
name me silent
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Linda Neill Poet Digter
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Linda Neill Poet Digter 15 February 2013

Wow I thank you so kindly senor.10 out of 10 for my poem, I appreciate it sincerely. Paolo Guiseppe Mazzarello

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 31 January 2013

Is it part of a play? Voice: 'As I look at you, I bury my lament and loom disappears. I want to tell you my entire story from the beginning...' Well, it doesn't seem a tragedy. Very fine lines. Chorus: 'Love is way of forgetting or forgiving what we lost'.

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