Lament Of A Shattered Soul! Comments

Can you hear the voice of a shattered heart You destroyed it with your insensitivity You cheated, you betrayed, you played with it? ? I can't think how can i provide an answer to this powerful inquisition. A thought provoking piece. Top score!

We came to this world 'trailing clouds of glory'! But because of our sinful acts, the brilliance of our life is lost! Let us pay heed to the wailing of our shattered heart and change the course of our life! An occasional introspection will help us see where we are! A very poignant write!

Wowwww. Wonderful work. What beautiful thoughts expressed, calling for a moment of introspection n some soul-searching. We all must hear the laments of our shattered souls. In our worldly desires n ambitions, we seldom stop n hear our inner voice. A work of depth.10 many times.

A very impressive and touching poem, thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem.

Do khadam bhi chalana nhi aaya.... Aur rukh parwardigar ka kr liya tuney..... Puri umar beet gayi khudh ko bhi pehchaan nhi paya... Aur katgharey mein aapni galtiyon key bhagwan khada kr diya tuney...... Marvelous penned mam........ Really grateful to you for such thoughts..... Thanks for sharing....

Can you hear the voice of a shattered heart You destroyed it with your insensitivity.......just amazing....amazingly narrated ....loved it.....thank you for sharing :)

Very few have the ears that listen to the wounded soul........They suppress the voice of the soul and follow their witty wishes...Nicely penned my Friend....10+++