Monday, January 21, 2019

Lament For Simon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once my neighbor asked of me
would I, for a modest fee,
tend his dog? "It won't be hard;
he will stay in our backyard.
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Harley White
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Bill Cantrell 24 January 2019

I’m glad you saved it and posted it also for the poetry world to see, sometimes I read something I have written years ago and had forgotten, then when I read it years later...I think I would like to go in the past and visit my younger self for I realize that I have changed so much...and I kind of miss the old self, if that makes sense, again...I always find it a joy to read anything you pen!

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Harley White 24 January 2019

Yes, what you say makes sense and I still like quite a few of my poems from earlier days. But I must say that I wouldn’t want to go back and be that self again. At any rate, I’m pleased that you enjoy the diversity of my works, some of which surprise me from the past. Thank you!

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Bill Cantrell 23 January 2019

..feed and walk him once a day..I expected the Milky Way...be it big or be it small..a favors shadow still stands tall..., oh heavenly poetess, you come down to earth with a humble poem, the anomaly involving time dilation...watching a neighbors dog for two light years.....or weeks, I loved it! ! !

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Harley White 24 January 2019

Oh my, your high praise takes my breath away! This was written eons ago (so it seems) , handwritten and given to those neighbors. However, I saved a copy from days gone by and finally posted it. I am truly pleased that people can still resonate with that simple poem. Thank you as always for this marvelous response!

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