Saturday, October 19, 2019

Lament Comments

Rating: 5.0

The night is falling
Over my dreams
Wrapping them in a darkness
Both subtle and screaming
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Nosheen Irfan
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 July 2023

a beautiful, yet profound poem Bravo!

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Anjandev Roy 26 July 2023

Magnificent expression......thanks for sharing.....

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M Asim Nehal 23 October 2019

Outstanding Poem! ! ! ! Some thoughts provoking questions: Whose pain cannot even match A poor man's unshed tears Do the stars belong to all of us Rich and poor alike

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 October 2019

Hi Nosheen, Very enchanting poem. Very poetically expressed “The night is falling Over my dreams Wrapping them in a darkness” Loved the way the poem bloomed. Steals the readers’ heart. A million hundreds..And onto MyPoemList.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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