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A year of married bliss,
Lost in a moment of quarreling hiss.
Arrows of words piercing the very soul,
Like Brutus's dagger that bled Caesar whole
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Loved this one. The angst of a newly wed bride at her husband's. Thanks for sharing.
A supposed month of honeymoon and pure bliss filled with distress well depicted in the poem. Reality has set in as couples realize how incompatible they are. But patience, understanding, faith, careful nurturing... can still be brought to bear in the relationship to keep the course of marriage in proper perspective. A lovely poem with nice rhyme scheme, well articulated and beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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7/29/2025 6:33:13 AM # 1.0.0
Just a reflection back to the poem that launched a valued member! Happy Valentine from your 1st Poem, four years ago! ! Keep writing!