Lament Comments

So nice to read, it's so nostalgic what pulls me back to my childhood... sitting in my mom's lap and playing around her..... Thank you Valerie to rekindle those lovely days.

A really moving poem Valerie. I love it.

Beautiful heartfelt poem Val-so moving. Having lost my Mother, Father, and baby son myself, I can understand where your coming from.I echo the comments from other readers of this poem, so well done Val.

So touching Valerie.....this stunned me into silence, i am so sorry.....beautifully penned with such honest adoration

Oh my God! You're good! Crying again (she types through eyes blurred with tears) ! You have a beautiful gift! ! ! ! Dawn xxx

Wonderful poem, brought a tear to my eye.

Valerie, I stand corrected on this one. I misread liquefaction. My apologies. I gave you a 10 on this for content as well as your meter. I love your work and would love to hear you read some of it someday.

nothing touches, nor replaces, a mother's love...