Lament Comments

I have read chemistry although not much, I understood and appreciated your poem.

very powerful. touches you moves you and reminds you of your own unresolved sorrows

very powerful like the sorrow and pain with unique expressions...

Impressive indeed, like this too

stay unseen for years and years...is very nice.liked it.

nice poem...accurately put...

A beautiful write with wonderful imagery! Enjoyed it fully. Thanks for sharing.

Sorrows which will not melt or dissolve burden the heart like the inorganic synthetics burden the earth.....! Beautiful comparison and a powerful write! !

nice to cake Awfully abraded, they fume and fret, nudge day and night The caricature doesn't expose scars caged within and to unlock them with an instant outburst

wow that was great i wish i could write like that

A beautiful read, so much truth in your stanzas. A subject I can relate to.

the simile in the first para touching deep the readers' mind.

A fabulous read! Well done uch and thank you very m

A really great poem, like it. A fantastic write.